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I'm not a perfect being,
nor have I ever claimed to be.
And I'll never be perfect for seeing
how much you truly mean to me.

For your voice, your laughter, and your smiles
are as perfect as can be.
And I would walk over nine-thousand miles
to have it all again; if only just to see.

Why am I so hung up over you?
You are not quite perfect, either.
Yet you were as sweet as morning dew,
and my mortal presence feels all too meager.

To me, you are most flawless;
the heavens themselves could not compare.
With you, my feelings are lawless,
And I know it is my heart you have ensnared.
©2008-2009 ~Tsukitsune
:icontsukitsune:

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This poem was written a little while ago, and I just put it up now. xD I know, slacker.

But there is someone in particular I was meaning to have read this, but I'm not so sure if they will. But nonetheless, all I'll say is that... even though you don't think too highly of yourself dear, there is always someone who believes that you're perfect the way you are; flaws and failures included.

People like that are rare; you need to keep hold of them if you ever find them, and never let go... Because if you do, they might not always wait for you to come to your senses, and they'll move on to someone who can love them for THEIR imperfections.

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:iconblackedstars:
:hug: This hellhole earth needs more people like you. *nodnod*

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Forget regret or live in fear.
:icontsukitsune:
xD To do what? Write more emopressing lurv poetry? The world has a whole genre of people for that. ;3

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Let's get these teen hearts beating. Faster, faster
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls,
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close?
:iconblackedstars:
; ; Noesh, to love peoples for their flaaaaws.

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Forget regret or live in fear.
:icontsukitsune:
x3 Oohsh. *huggle*

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Let's get these teen hearts beating. Faster, faster
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls,
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close?
:iconblackedstars:
*glompage*

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Forget regret or live in fear.
:icontsukitsune:
Raaar, no way... ninja old people...

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Let's get these teen hearts beating. Faster, faster
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls,
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close?
:icondinsaru:
thats absolutely beautiful

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life is the ultimate fail.
:icontsukitsune:
^//^ Hehe, thank you, darlin.

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Let's get these teen hearts beating. Faster, faster
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls,
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close?
:iconblackedstars:
=O I be old ninja people? ; ;

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Forget regret or live in fear.
:icontsukitsune:
xD Nu, I was just watching Ben 10 at the moment I wrote that.

You is ninja YOUNG people. =D

--
Let's get these teen hearts beating. Faster, faster
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls,
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close?

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